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The Eternal Lie-In
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04-06-2012, 10:36 PM
Thanks, Bilbo and Erthona, for your feedback
 Erthona, do you think the poem would benefit from putting the last line at the end of the penultimate one?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Eternal Lie-In - by heslopian - 04-05-2012, 02:19 PM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by addy - 04-05-2012, 03:05 PM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by heslopian - 04-05-2012, 03:26 PM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by billy - 04-06-2012, 05:51 PM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by Erthona - 04-06-2012, 08:56 PM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by heslopian - 04-06-2012, 10:36 PM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by Philatone - 04-07-2012, 08:28 AM
RE: The Eternal Lie-In - by heslopian - 04-07-2012, 09:00 AM
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