new year
#2
you could lose 'but'.

i think it's a great senryu (not sure if the title could be the seasonal word.)
can't believe i missed these. i'm impressed.
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new year - by rayheinrich - 02-26-2012, 07:02 AM
RE: new year - by billy - 04-06-2012, 06:07 PM



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