"Look At Mine!!"

[billy]

yep, it's frowned upon in the crit boards but as leanne stated it's common on the fun boards, in miscellaneous, you may type what type of feedback you wish. personally i don't do the look at this poem in a comparison thing, i don't see it as a help feedback wise. now and i agin i'll re write a line or two as an explanation of what i mean.
and that's how it is.