04-04-2012, 09:24 PM
v- thanks for the return, appreciate your addition and time.
billy- notes taken. i think i'm working too hard on this. i have made another edit to address flow. I want to add another stanza after the first, but then I'm going to let it sit for a while. hopefully, this can get some of the first version back
billy- notes taken. i think i'm working too hard on this. i have made another edit to address flow. I want to add another stanza after the first, but then I'm going to let it sit for a while. hopefully, this can get some of the first version back
Written only for you to consider.