John Holmes Is Dead

[billy]

There was a purpose for John Holmes
and his 'Biff-Bam Thank-You Maam's,'
a method in his pendulating creed.
Propensity for kicking out the shams
of decency by a storehouse of salty seed.
Erections on cue. Forbearance damns,
stalls the act. The trick’s to enviate the normal size,
and dangle it rising before a starlet's eyes.
No matter if in film (or out beside a lake),
for power in the loins leads to give and take.
Contortions to admit the thing between her buns,
propinquity to her thighs. It's not the same old dance
for innocent Annabel and Sue. Blow the horns
forever! for the head that bobs needs no bribes.
A well-endowed man gives off succulent vibes.

v

rock on king dong.

if the meter were tightened up it would make it even better.
i think you almost have a good sonnet here V. i like the content and even with the meter it flows well.
forever! for the head that bobs needs no bribes.
is a great line with more than one way of looking at it. would make a great epitaph.
i can't say i have any real nits as i like it as is.