04-03-2012, 11:47 AM
[quote='Philatone' pid='93677' dateline='1333411228']
At some point,
"Frank" no longer fit
his six foot frame.
Perhaps the name
could not capture his size,
the glasses, circled
around his nose, or how his breath
navigates a silver plated flute.
So when Buck
drives me to a concert,
my thoughts turn to the signature
bound to his license,
where another identity
curves in ink like a contract
left on a table in a locked
and buried room, forgotten.
His wrists, unscathed
above a steering wheel,
draw me to my arms
where bonds rattle,
surface and sink.
**
Again I risk backflow by saying this 'feels' like a
poem. I say this for the reason some poems don't feel
like poems.
I taught poetry at the university level and I often
told a student named Sally, "Sally, this feels like
a poem!" Sally was happy and those in the class
applauded.
So I applaud this poem because it feels like a poem.
Maybe I don't 'get' the content as I would like (I'm
staving off dementia with heavy doses of Irish and
Texas Hold'em-- and writing nonesense)
But it's ok, this poem and my incomprehension.
V
At some point,
"Frank" no longer fit
his six foot frame.
Perhaps the name
could not capture his size,
the glasses, circled
around his nose, or how his breath
navigates a silver plated flute.
So when Buck
drives me to a concert,
my thoughts turn to the signature
bound to his license,
where another identity
curves in ink like a contract
left on a table in a locked
and buried room, forgotten.
His wrists, unscathed
above a steering wheel,
draw me to my arms
where bonds rattle,
surface and sink.
**
Again I risk backflow by saying this 'feels' like a
poem. I say this for the reason some poems don't feel
like poems.
I taught poetry at the university level and I often
told a student named Sally, "Sally, this feels like
a poem!" Sally was happy and those in the class
applauded.
So I applaud this poem because it feels like a poem.
Maybe I don't 'get' the content as I would like (I'm
staving off dementia with heavy doses of Irish and
Texas Hold'em-- and writing nonesense)
But it's ok, this poem and my incomprehension.
V

