03-24-2012, 03:16 AM
dale
-thanks for the little nits; much appreciated. I wasn't sure about the "is with their" comment; could you give me an example? I'm going to re-examine that "batteries" and "nestled" stanza as I like your suggestion and will play with it, as well as a number of the smaller word recommendations. I'll consider changing the "set of teeth," but I wanted something a bit more aggressive. again, thanks for the time
rob
-thanks for the feedback! I'm glad a dog person can enjoy; my girlfriend wasn't as happy. as I said for dale, I wanted something a bit more aggressive than just nails for the ending, but i'll definitely consider an alternative. appreciate your time.
-thanks for the little nits; much appreciated. I wasn't sure about the "is with their" comment; could you give me an example? I'm going to re-examine that "batteries" and "nestled" stanza as I like your suggestion and will play with it, as well as a number of the smaller word recommendations. I'll consider changing the "set of teeth," but I wanted something a bit more aggressive. again, thanks for the time
rob
-thanks for the feedback! I'm glad a dog person can enjoy; my girlfriend wasn't as happy. as I said for dale, I wanted something a bit more aggressive than just nails for the ending, but i'll definitely consider an alternative. appreciate your time.
Written only for you to consider.