Death In The Library-- by gerunds

[Roy Hobbs]

for what it is, I think you have a fine work here. nice to see a little experimentation, especially with a verb form that can get a bad reputation
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Entirely an experiment.
Thanks for the reply.

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passio?

Well, that fairly gruesome. Sexual sadisming!

The use of "potations" seems a bit over the top, as there are several more common words that would convey the same thing, as there are no connotative aspects of the word to recommend it over others.

Overall it has a nice pace, although the energy seems to go a little limp towards then end

Dale

"limp toward the end"-- limp for sure
at the end.

Yes, potations now seems the wrong word--
back in the closset this goes

Thanks for the reply.