03-22-2012, 04:18 PM
passio?
Well, that fairly gruesome. Sexual sadisming!
The use of "potations" seems a bit over the top, as there are several more common words that would convey the same thing, as there are no connotative aspects of the word to recommend it over others.
Overall it has a nice pace, although the energy seems to go a little limp towards then end
Dale
Well, that fairly gruesome. Sexual sadisming!
The use of "potations" seems a bit over the top, as there are several more common words that would convey the same thing, as there are no connotative aspects of the word to recommend it over others.
Overall it has a nice pace, although the energy seems to go a little limp towards then end
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.