Sunday Afternoon by William Marsland.

[billy]

To be quite honest with you, I like the poem a lot. It's just the word glee. I've seen that word in poems so many times that at this point it's become common...for me at least.
That and grassy vapours but Larry already went over that.

thanks for the feedback Sev. it's always welcome.

i think i can change glee to something less common.
i'll also try and sort out vapours.

@addy.

your right about the beer, i meant the condensation
shouldn't be hard to sort out the fuse.

thanks for the feedback.