< middle of you > (oops, damn spring love poems...)
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Yes, clearly a case of conjunctionitis.
You've cured it nicely, put it in the pink by taking it out.
(And their white space ghosts make it better still.)

P.S. And yes, you did destroy my carefully crafted profile of Eros.
But Leanne was the only one who could possibly have recognized it
and the last thing she needs is another freekin' Greeken image.

But wait, now that i take another look, i can clearly see Eris
(and, if i'm right, in left profile). Not only a more appropriate
god, but so MUCH less literal that the poem's gained another leg
(or it's happy to see us).


                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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RE: < middle of you > (oops, damn spring love poems...) - by rayheinrich - 03-21-2012, 11:04 PM



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