< middle of you > (oops, damn spring love poems...)
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(03-20-2012, 04:18 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
< middle of you >

i left
right in the middle of you
but
in the other cities
there was always
a street like you
and
i would steal it's name
and
sing to it
and
take it to bed with me
before
they made me put it back
but now
i'm back
and
i'm right
where i left off
right
in the middle of you

- - -


oops, damn spring, here it comes, love love love...
.
and here am I with a lit fire of the season, so sad!

edit in gee in the light of day that comment looks like a bad crit. t'wasent I was cold and letting you know I had read you and was warming up to it with further reads.

I really need to think before I talk!!! or say nothing

Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte

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RE: < middle of you > (oops, damn spring love poems...) - by Bronte - 03-21-2012, 08:48 PM



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