03-20-2012, 12:15 PM
I assume this may have something to do with healing the ravages of war, but if it is, it seems a somewhat superficial treatment. I think it would be hard to lend it much weight using a three foot line of accentual verse as it comes across too much as a doggerel. Also, the idea of "The Ferryman" is confusing, as the general response to an undefined "Ferryman" usually conjurers up images of Charon.
Sorry, this just doesn't do to much for me.
Dale
Sorry, this just doesn't do to much for me.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.