03-17-2012, 06:43 PM
Alas there is no cure for my editing, it’s take what is offered, or keep your original in a safety deposit box. I always believe in show not tell, that that goes for both trying to write credible poetry and trying to be a critic .
My aim is to always reply with fewer words than the poem contains. And I cheat more often and will use most of the poets words . I think that’s wise don’t you? ~~~
You can find me here
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I still say keep working on it.
My aim is to always reply with fewer words than the poem contains. And I cheat more often and will use most of the poets words . I think that’s wise don’t you? ~~~
You can find me here
http://www.tryst3.com/about.html
I still say keep working on it.
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte