at the artisan's
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agreed with your thoughts on that line being a tad unwieldy. shortened it in a way that keeps about the same meaning I hope. also removed the first line as perhaps it was a bit extra

thanks for the read and input
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at the artisan's - by Philatone - 03-15-2012, 08:45 AM
RE: at the artisan's - by billy - 03-16-2012, 12:19 PM
RE: at the artisan's - by Todd - 03-16-2012, 12:32 PM
RE: at the artisan's - by Philatone - 03-16-2012, 02:00 PM
RE: at the artisan's - by Erthona - 03-16-2012, 04:04 PM
RE: at the artisan's - by Philatone - 03-17-2012, 05:14 AM
RE: at the artisan's - by Erthona - 03-17-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: at the artisan's - by Philatone - 03-17-2012, 11:56 AM
RE: at the artisan's - by Leanne - 03-17-2012, 07:58 PM
RE: at the artisan's - by Philatone - 03-18-2012, 12:22 AM
RE: at the artisan's - by Leanne - 03-18-2012, 06:43 AM



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