03-16-2012, 02:00 PM
billy
played around the breaks; let me know if they seem off. I think i cleared up the "eyes" bit, and I like the breaks better now. agree with your comments on the last stanza; thank you for your time
todd
thanks for the quick note. agreed with you on the "another room". my only concern is that "the wall" makes sense, but I think it does. appreciate your time
played around the breaks; let me know if they seem off. I think i cleared up the "eyes" bit, and I like the breaks better now. agree with your comments on the last stanza; thank you for your time
todd
thanks for the quick note. agreed with you on the "another room". my only concern is that "the wall" makes sense, but I think it does. appreciate your time
Written only for you to consider.