03-15-2012, 01:44 AM
(03-15-2012, 12:23 AM)Heslopian Wrote: So adorable, yet so sinister...Possibly a little too short to even qualify as haiku. However, though few, the word choice is excellent and the juxtaposition of "adorable" and "sinister" more than compensates for the brevity. Structurally, I think you missed an opportunity here and would respectfully suggest "So sinister, yet so adorable". In the words of the great Pliny Gawthorpe of our street,"There's many a man walking the streets today who didn't get his sonics out soon enough......"
Best,
Tectak


