Hai kuckoo
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Dawn opens window : warm air rises : I rise too.
Green grass tinted : lightly scented : sent green light.
Lemon squeezing : crocus poketh : purple later.
Twigs dry as sticks : twigs turn sticky : buds ready.
Rabbit's young 'uns : mornin' runnin : all day funnin'.
Tits from nowhere: endless squeeking : endless seeking.
Midges swarm: evenings warm : bats breakfast.
Pupaea pulse : with life returning: on threads twirling.
Sun going higher : over spire : all day Sunday.
Spring haiku : rhymes with cuckoo : Hi cuckoo!
Tectak
Spring 2012


Scans perfect 5,7,5 in Japanese. Honest. Should be in fun forum?


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Hai kuckoo - by tectak - 03-12-2012, 07:47 PM
RE: Hai kuckoo - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2012, 07:23 AM
RE: Hai kuckoo - by Leanne - 03-13-2012, 08:01 AM
RE: Hai kuckoo - by tectak - 03-13-2012, 08:28 AM
RE: Hai kuckoo - by Leanne - 03-13-2012, 08:51 AM
RE: Hai kuckoo - by Erthona - 03-14-2012, 03:05 AM
RE: Hai kuckoo - by tectak - 03-14-2012, 06:38 PM



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