Hercynian
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Hercynian* Silva from far above, I see
the mountainous terrain of Germany
and I imagine you were, as before
from those mountains you were shorn.
When Rome could only stand at your feet
pretending you it did defeat,
and there is nothing that I hold so dear
as knowing you taught Rome to fear.
Yet time it seems can defeat all foes,
just as it heals all ills and woes.
I regret I’ll never walk again,
through Black Forested, wood dense land.
Nor e’er again be battered by the Rhine,
where I left my flesh behind.
My heart there also was meant to be,
so my spirit could fly free.

©2012 ~Erthona



* Pronounced like Hey-sin-ee-ah: A primeval forest, the remains of which is the Black Forest.

The form: This is written in accentual verse with alternating lines of five and four feet ending in rhyming couplets.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

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Hercynian - by Erthona - 03-12-2012, 01:39 PM
RE: Hercynian - by popeye - 03-12-2012, 02:09 PM
RE: Hercynian - by Erthona - 03-14-2012, 02:43 AM
RE: Hercynian - by tectak - 03-12-2012, 04:52 PM
RE: Hercynian - by billy - 03-16-2012, 12:02 PM
RE: Hercynian - by Erthona - 03-16-2012, 03:47 PM
RE: Hercynian - by billy - 03-16-2012, 04:22 PM
RE: Hercynian - by Erthona - 03-17-2012, 12:23 PM
RE: Hercynian - by Philatone - 03-17-2012, 12:48 PM
RE: Hercynian - by Erthona - 03-18-2012, 05:14 AM
RE: Hercynian - by Philatone - 03-18-2012, 05:36 AM
RE: Hercynian - by Erthona - 03-18-2012, 08:10 AM



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