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interesting verbiage.
it reads like a train of thought's train of thought, and
rides along at a breakneck pace. i like the way you end.
it feels like something is being stepped over. different. and it get's a thumbs up from me.
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unsuited - by Leanne - 03-10-2012, 04:46 PM
RE: unsuited - by billy - 03-10-2012, 05:15 PM
RE: unsuited - by rayheinrich - 03-10-2012, 10:16 PM
RE: unsuited - by Leanne - 03-11-2012, 12:39 AM
RE: unsuited - by Erthona - 03-11-2012, 05:10 AM
RE: unsuited - by Leanne - 03-11-2012, 06:16 AM
RE: unsuited - by abu nuwas - 03-11-2012, 07:27 AM
RE: unsuited - by Leanne - 03-11-2012, 07:37 AM
RE: unsuited - by abu nuwas - 03-11-2012, 09:39 AM
RE: unsuited - by Leanne - 03-11-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: unsuited - by abu nuwas - 03-11-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: unsuited - by Erthona - 03-11-2012, 09:52 AM
RE: unsuited - by Leanne - 03-11-2012, 11:59 AM



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