03-10-2012, 05:15 PM
interesting verbiage.
it reads like a train of thought's train of thought, and
rides along at a breakneck pace. i like the way you end.
it feels like something is being stepped over. different. and it get's a thumbs up from me.
it reads like a train of thought's train of thought, and
rides along at a breakneck pace. i like the way you end.
it feels like something is being stepped over. different. and it get's a thumbs up from me.
