Six Feet Wide and Seven Feet Under

[billy]

Looking at it now I definitely agree, a lot of my words are a bit cliche and I wish I had been a bit more creative! It can be a bit harsh on this section but I'm not afraid of a bit of criticism! (: It was great getting to see this from another persons view so thanks for the advice!

Madi

way to go Madi.
my suggestion would be to put stuff in the mild crit forum for now and if you have a piece you really need strong feedback with in order to give you some ideas; get it in here. don't forget to visit the just for fun section and some of the other play pits we have