03-10-2012, 04:59 AM
Geoff,
As this has already been gone over a bit, and I come to it late, I will simply state that the current version seems to clearly convey what it is you are try to convey. It creates sort of a nice duality, and for me seems to have a hint of Hitchcock or maybe the "Twilight Zone". Beyond that, I have nothing critical to say about this last version.
Dale
As this has already been gone over a bit, and I come to it late, I will simply state that the current version seems to clearly convey what it is you are try to convey. It creates sort of a nice duality, and for me seems to have a hint of Hitchcock or maybe the "Twilight Zone". Beyond that, I have nothing critical to say about this last version.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.