03-10-2012, 03:58 AM
I would say that when someone makes such a comment as "Change the last line, then I will bother to crit it" , it says that the last line so ruined the poem, there is no point in critiquing it. Personally I think that is an accurate assessment, without the last line the poem takes on a completely different feel, and certainly one that is less condescending.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.