The Heat

[Wildcard]

Hi Billy,
This is great! I am already thinking it might be my favorite of yours.

The Heat

I jump into metaphor --Great opening line and L2 gives a great image for me.
like a lemming into space.
Words fly and land; splat
flat against a pixelated net. --not sure what you mean exactly, but I do like the way it sounds together.
My similis are oft' misspelt --
and unkempt, not dyslexic
but hectic wrote. No time to scratch
my scroat that itches, like
some on heat bitches --Is it common to say 'on heat' where you live? I am used to hearing 'in heat', but in this case I think I would go with 'heated'
hidden in my pen.

Thanks for sharing.