The Heat
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(03-09-2012, 04:51 PM)billy Wrote:  The Heat

I jump into metaphor
like a lemming into space.we are off to a romping start. Tally ho! I like it already
Words fly and land; splat
flat against a pixelated net.or " words fly and land;
splat! Flat, against the pixel net. " Just to keep the pace up

My similis are 'oft misspelt
and unkempt, not dyslexic
but hectic wrote. No time to scratch
my scroat that itches, like
some on heat bitches"on-heat" maybe?
hidden in my pen.
Yes. I like it as this is genre mirth-verse. But...... I want rhyme...all the time...this is fine...No more whine......ing from me.....Nice to see.......poetry.......full of glee......thanks billy.
Best,
Tectak
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Messages In This Thread
The Heat - by billy - 03-09-2012, 04:51 PM
RE: The Heat - by Erthona - 03-09-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: The Heat - by tectak - 03-09-2012, 11:24 PM
RE: The Heat - by Wildcard - 03-10-2012, 01:49 AM
RE: The Heat - by Leanne - 03-10-2012, 07:20 AM
RE: The Heat - by billy - 03-10-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: The Heat - by Leanne - 03-10-2012, 01:34 PM
RE: The Heat - by billy - 03-10-2012, 01:36 PM
RE: The Heat - by Philatone - 03-11-2012, 01:26 AM
RE: The Heat - by Leanne - 03-11-2012, 01:28 AM
RE: The Heat - by heslopian - 03-11-2012, 05:15 AM



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