Sometimes I Bleed

[billy]

ok, I just plain simply give up.

why on earth would you give up?
you say you read poetry here that feels the same as this. you say;

I realize the piece was vague and somewhat abstract... but no more so than when I read most of the poetry written by others here without having a damn clue what you are all writing about

see you can give feedback. if thats what you see in some of the poetry here, say so in critique or feedback with the reason why. writing feedback will give you more insight into your own poetry. you placed your poem here and got some good feedback, though it seemed harsh it wasn't really...apart from dale thinking writing as corpse mundane (a valid point)
most of the stuff mentioned could be done in a fairly quick edit.

it isn't about us giving feedback really, it's about you seeing if there's anything you get that's worth using. (i think tecktak said something similar)

so no you can't leave, you can stay and show the next person who feels gutted like a fish that it's really only a minor abrasion you suffered.