So Kind
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Geoff,

Yeah, some of this is filler which probably needs to be removed. The first part may suffer from over editing which may have removed necessary parts that now removed leave what is left with less meaning.

Thanks for the critique.

Thanks jiminy.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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So Kind - by Erthona - 03-01-2012, 03:38 AM
RE: So Kind - by rayheinrich - 03-01-2012, 05:55 AM
RE: So Kind - by tectak - 03-01-2012, 06:15 AM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-01-2012, 07:13 AM
RE: So Kind - by rayheinrich - 03-01-2012, 09:59 AM
RE: So Kind - by ckeo - 03-01-2012, 11:26 AM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-01-2012, 01:48 PM
RE: So Kind - by rayheinrich - 03-02-2012, 02:07 AM
RE: So Kind - by Philatone - 03-04-2012, 08:03 AM
RE: So Kind - by popeye - 03-04-2012, 09:42 AM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-06-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: So Kind - by billy - 03-06-2012, 12:04 PM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-07-2012, 10:26 AM



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