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#9

03-06-2012, 06:24 AM

No nits. The revision works very well for me.

I think it's an effective rewrite.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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hotel - by Philatone - 03-04-2012, 07:46 AM

RE: hotel - by Todd - 03-05-2012, 06:29 AM

RE: hotel - by Philatone - 03-05-2012, 10:00 AM

RE: hotel - by billy - 03-05-2012, 01:10 PM

RE: hotel - by Philatone - 03-05-2012, 02:06 PM

RE: hotel - by tectak - 03-05-2012, 09:32 PM

RE: hotel - by Philatone - 03-05-2012, 10:13 PM

RE: hotel - by Philatone - 03-06-2012, 05:50 AM

RE: hotel - by Todd - 03-06-2012, 06:24 AM

RE: hotel - by billy - 03-06-2012, 12:17 PM

RE: hotel - by Erthona - 03-10-2012, 04:59 AM

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