What the Storm Taught Us (Revision 4)
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Geoff,

The hard part about this was finding a way to deal with the calm sea without resorting to the cliched glass, crystal, or mirrored surface...good catch on the "the" before waves. I'll give some thought to the knife part and the other so still.

Thanks
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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What the Storm Taught Us (Revision 4) - by Todd - 02-28-2012, 09:12 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by popeye - 02-28-2012, 10:18 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by Philatone - 02-28-2012, 11:57 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by tectak - 02-28-2012, 04:57 PM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by Todd - 02-29-2012, 01:10 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by tectak - 02-29-2012, 03:52 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by tectak - 03-07-2012, 08:48 PM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me - by Todd - 02-29-2012, 04:00 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me (Revision) - by Todd - 02-29-2012, 01:39 PM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me (Revision) - by Todd - 03-03-2012, 05:32 AM
RE: What the Storm Taught Me (Revision 2) - by Todd - 03-03-2012, 01:30 PM



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