for me either the title or L2 is redundant. i think it's one of those poems where you need a more ambiguous title.
at first read i thought it preachy but i was wrong. it isn't preachy at all.
you do love that word opal
personally not my cuppa tea, but i know lots of people whose cup of tea it would be and it's well written which is what counts
hy:
i really like the 5th stanza.
at first read i thought it preachy but i was wrong. it isn't preachy at all.
you do love that word opal
personally not my cuppa tea, but i know lots of people whose cup of tea it would be and it's well written which is what counts
hy:i really like the 5th stanza.