So Kind
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ckeo,

Thanks for the read and the comments.

""separated" does not give the impression of the permanence"

It was not suppose to. What was being highlighted was the "separating out", the dividing of the possessions, and that a just division was at best what one can expect when the other person is hurt and aggrieved. Of course this is about more than just physical belongings.
The reason I used "separated out" was because it carries with it the idea of creating two piles. It is a wheat and chafe sort of thing, where one is good and one is trash.

Dale
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Ray,

"Here's something that doesn't use "abhor":
"Justice is the best that you can gain,
when underpants instead of mercy rain.""

Nothing ungainly about that.

Tonight's weather,

"Billowing waist, with a chance of underpants!"

It's raining underpants.
How do you know?
I just stepped into a jock with a pair of boxers and got skivvies all over my clean pants!


Here's a poem that's got "abhor",
and "butterflies"; done, out the door.

A Raylimerick

Sailed in on the ship abhor,
two lines, then...raised anchor?
--that won't do,
anchor down, Mister Magoo,
We need at least three more.

Ray, you may need to be treated for logomisia!
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
So Kind - by Erthona - 03-01-2012, 03:38 AM
RE: So Kind - by rayheinrich - 03-01-2012, 05:55 AM
RE: So Kind - by tectak - 03-01-2012, 06:15 AM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-01-2012, 07:13 AM
RE: So Kind - by rayheinrich - 03-01-2012, 09:59 AM
RE: So Kind - by ckeo - 03-01-2012, 11:26 AM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-01-2012, 01:48 PM
RE: So Kind - by rayheinrich - 03-02-2012, 02:07 AM
RE: So Kind - by Philatone - 03-04-2012, 08:03 AM
RE: So Kind - by popeye - 03-04-2012, 09:42 AM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-06-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: So Kind - by billy - 03-06-2012, 12:04 PM
RE: So Kind - by Erthona - 03-07-2012, 10:26 AM



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