03-01-2012, 07:13 AM
Sorry guys, abhor was supposed to be abhorred. I change the tense elsewhere and forgot to change that part.
Ray, as abhorrent as abhor is, (not to mention sounding slightly Persian) every poet must write a poem that uses it. It is like the butterfly poem.
"fix rhythm of last two lines"
There was suppose to be a caesura of some kind after "intended", but I forgot
Thanks
tectak,
Yes, and overabundance of commas have always been a failing of mine...one of the few areas I am generous in
"What a bore it now is." I (or even we) now abhor""
What vehemence against a poor 'ittle word!
"Well hello, Muse, where have you been?Really good commitment verse end."
What a marvelous little tend, can you say what it portends?
OK, I'll regularize it just for you,
although I haven't seen the Muse,
she leaves me when I'm feeling Blue.
Dale
Ray, as abhorrent as abhor is, (not to mention sounding slightly Persian) every poet must write a poem that uses it. It is like the butterfly poem.
"fix rhythm of last two lines"
There was suppose to be a caesura of some kind after "intended", but I forgot
Thanks
tectak,
Yes, and overabundance of commas have always been a failing of mine...one of the few areas I am generous in
"What a bore it now is." I (or even we) now abhor""
What vehemence against a poor 'ittle word!
"Well hello, Muse, where have you been?Really good commitment verse end."
What a marvelous little tend, can you say what it portends?
OK, I'll regularize it just for you,
although I haven't seen the Muse,
she leaves me when I'm feeling Blue.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.