02-28-2012, 10:18 AM
What a well crafted poem Todd, done with the poise of a master, the very first line takes hold, and remains right to the end leaving one waiting in the eerie silence. Hope this helps mate as I'm still a novice and can't really offer better critique, loved the poem, thanks for sharing.
PS Using the children as a vehicle for terror is very clever and makes it a must read. Cheers.
PS Using the children as a vehicle for terror is very clever and makes it a must read. Cheers.
Oh what a wicket web we weave!