Artificial Preservatives
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(02-16-2012, 04:19 AM)Leanne Wrote:  Welcome to photoreal poetry
Perfect reproduction of meaning
One single image
Hold still
Smile

Pop

Cultural deficits
Campbell’s soup and cream of
Consciousness
This is where you stay
Do not think
Outside

The box

Does not exist
Except as another
Extracted and impacted
Cliché
Clean and clipped
Commitment verse..point made and no mistake......This is not really a crit as this is not really poetry....but it is good. You want bovver? Wait till erthona sees those capitals!
Best,
Tectak
Stay fresh.
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Messages In This Thread
Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-16-2012, 04:19 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-16-2012, 09:45 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-17-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-17-2012, 04:58 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by billy - 02-17-2012, 08:58 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:06 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-18-2012, 04:48 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:59 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by tectak - 02-24-2012, 04:47 AM



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