02-23-2012, 06:42 AM
I dunno, I just think some things could easily be bipartite in a sense of memory/current emotion (like if you're trying to create an image or experience that isn't wholly tangible?).
Thankyou for sharing your views.
I'm thinking:
Writing can be very restictive due to its uncertain nature -- which promotes a stricter and tighter use of English.
The chosen structure(/style/topic) of the poem probably plays a big part in peoples' tolerances of such devices. -- indeed the use of such things has to be subtle and will probably crash horribly into the above thought.
"Profoundness" seems like a tall order as an edit criterion, though I have never been properly educated in poetry, I was always under the impression that poetry was meant to be the xxx grabbingly, heart-exploding rich text of purpose. As such I'd think there would be other, equally important, things to consider? I suspect I am probably misinterpretting what you mean by "profound" -- ohsnap! that segues back into the first thought! :O
Once again, thank you all muchly for your time, you have given me a lot to think about. Sadly, I think slowly.
Interestingly... the first person in the world to be killed by a robot was called Bob Williams. :|
Thankyou for sharing your views.
I'm thinking:
Writing can be very restictive due to its uncertain nature -- which promotes a stricter and tighter use of English.
The chosen structure(/style/topic) of the poem probably plays a big part in peoples' tolerances of such devices. -- indeed the use of such things has to be subtle and will probably crash horribly into the above thought.
"Profoundness" seems like a tall order as an edit criterion, though I have never been properly educated in poetry, I was always under the impression that poetry was meant to be the xxx grabbingly, heart-exploding rich text of purpose. As such I'd think there would be other, equally important, things to consider? I suspect I am probably misinterpretting what you mean by "profound" -- ohsnap! that segues back into the first thought! :O
Once again, thank you all muchly for your time, you have given me a lot to think about. Sadly, I think slowly.
Interestingly... the first person in the world to be killed by a robot was called Bob Williams. :|