Song of the Reluctant Nihilist
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(02-21-2012, 05:47 PM)Heslopian Wrote:  Thank you for your kind words and feedback, tectakSmile In L7 "your" refers to everyone. I might change it to "one's" to maintain the first-person narrative.
Or "your hearts beat" if that is what you would really like to say.
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Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by heslopian - 02-20-2012, 12:26 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by popeye - 02-21-2012, 02:35 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by heslopian - 02-21-2012, 02:48 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by tectak - 02-21-2012, 05:43 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by heslopian - 02-21-2012, 05:47 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by tectak - 02-21-2012, 06:58 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by heslopian - 02-21-2012, 07:25 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by Philatone - 02-23-2012, 01:08 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by heslopian - 02-23-2012, 02:07 PM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by ckeo - 02-27-2012, 11:11 AM
RE: Song of the Reluctant Nihilist - by heslopian - 02-27-2012, 11:50 AM



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