In Bison breath

[tectak]

In Bison Breath version 2. Thanks Billy

In Bison breath the bursting bronze of early sun
thrusts glowing fingers through the boughs of beech.
This is the double dawn; of time itself, a course begun,
and of each day. A billion dawns proclaimed by eagle's screech.

In Bison breath here lay the beast, upon the beaded grass, and there
he stalked to cover lest the stirring mists dispersed, and clear
became. The dark shade hides, so in to shaftless forest with the bear,
wolf, beaver, boar, the lynx and trembling deer.

In Bison breath a silence falls and shifts the air, re-balancing the day
and all the scents of night are layered, still. Telling signs appear
to those who hunt and those who would be hunted; prey
to nature's sweet and cunning curse of need and fear.

In Bison breath hear through the warming air, far triumph tamed,
an echoed roar. Another darkness lost to dawn’s pale light;
another day, another sun, another battle and a victory claimed
o’er wild and wooded Bialowieza’s cold primeval night.

In Bison breath the white hoar frost quick melts, and green the grass
once more. And where he lay and where he slept will soon spring true
to wave in winds that carry off the scents of night. So as we pass
we, too, are transient spirits; yet they are many, we are but a few.

Tom Kirby.
After Bialowieza. September 2010

i only marked one double space tom but they are a few. (probably the copy and past from word i'm guessing)
apart from the 'clear' which i mentioned above the rhyme scheme is impeccable and goes unnoticed as it should. the bison refrain is excellent, i wanted to say beautiful but it is a too overused word. thanks for anchoring the poem with a place name. it only took a few seconds to google it and see it's a real place, and what type of place. you captured it's primeval quality better than one could expect. all in all not too shoddy
thanks for the journey (jmo)
billy

Thanks for the oversee billy. Version 2 posted above. All points investigated but I am still not happy with transient. I need another word to say the same thing.