Artificial Preservatives
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And so beautifully laid out this poem is. Not like those ones
whose only intent seems to be even lines. Talk about boxes!
(Please note: I made no mention of Greek gods.)

The idea of "reproduction of meaning" bent my brain cells when
I tried to wrap my brain. This is definitely Dr. Who territory.

"photoreal poetry"
"One single image/Hold still/Smile/Pop"
What excellent descriptions of haiku!

You can extract the box from the Cliché, but you can't extract
the Cliché from the box. Terribly impactful, and toothy!






                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-16-2012, 04:19 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-16-2012, 09:45 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-17-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-17-2012, 04:58 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by billy - 02-17-2012, 08:58 PM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:06 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by rayheinrich - 02-18-2012, 04:48 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:59 AM
RE: Artificial Preservatives - by tectak - 02-24-2012, 04:47 AM



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