02-14-2012, 10:09 PM
(02-14-2012, 12:59 AM)tectak Wrote: Unclichéd Valentinebugger, i actually google; uncliched valentine, poem expecting to have a gazillion with the same title, alas i were thwarted in my attempt to say, The titles a bit cliche.
I lie awake, dream on my love. Boiling in me, fizzing salts;
Inflate my world with pressured joy. Stay in my thoughts.
The font endowed by me for you? Verdana, love in bold and blue. i love this line, she's not like my lucinda
Yet love, my love, my twenty point, never backspaced though you've faults. (like a double space between though and you've)
Aspartined, my waking space is. Artificial some may say. For you I fought
And won this right, to choose the typeface. Now I shall make verse of you.
No cliché will the judges see; fresh words will endlessly exalt.
On Turkish linen, in papyrus, words in black phenolic ink. I have bought
For you to gaze on, a Valentine with love renewed.
Tectak
Valentine's day.
2012
not a lot to if anything to suggest, apart from, change the font
.it's definitely original for me, with an unobtrusive rhyme scheme.
thanks for the read

