02-10-2012, 12:58 AM
Nicely 'metaphored' poem.
Especially liked:
God said
I am in your head
cut it off
cut it out
come to me
I love the idea that believing in a god(s) requires not only delirium,
but the lack of a brain as well. Well, ok, that interpretation is a bit out of context for the poem; but as a reader, I cling to my 'write'to read extraneously.
P.S. What's with all this willful ignorance??
I stuck "Burke and Wills" into Goggle and it took 5 seconds to pop
the "Burke and Wills expedition" article up on my screen and another
whole damn minute to at least read the first paragraph!
People that take more time to declare their ignorance than to remedy it
are the same ones that should be taking long hikes in the desert!
(Same goes for people who type things like: "Duh, I don't know that word.)
P.P.S. Billy: Impolite messages in red about being off topic, especially
when part of the post is on topic, are disruptive and unnecessary.
Creative discussions almost always contain asides. Not only do they
humanize a discussion, they are often inserted by our subconscious
as clues to what the damn thing that's being discussed is really about.
P.P.P.S. Sorry, gotta go, I'm late for bitching about a new lawn ordnance
that the clowns at the Baytown City Council are trying to lay on us lawn abiding citizens.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions