Phases of Venus

Phases of Venus

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02-08-2012, 04:36 AM (This post was last modified: 02-08-2012, 04:36 AM by Leanne.)

I appreciate your input, Tectak. This is indeed a first draft and will be edited, so all suggestions are being taken on board.

Does $100 make it clearer for you? I'll not put that in the poem though.

It could be worse

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Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 01-31-2012, 08:48 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by abu nuwas - 01-31-2012, 09:38 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 01-31-2012, 09:45 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by abu nuwas - 01-31-2012, 09:59 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 01-31-2012, 10:03 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Philatone - 01-31-2012, 01:52 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 01-31-2012, 02:43 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by popeye - 01-31-2012, 07:30 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 02-01-2012, 04:36 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Erthona - 02-04-2012, 07:08 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 02-06-2012, 07:12 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Erthona - 02-06-2012, 04:48 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by tectak - 02-07-2012, 09:43 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 02-08-2012, 04:36 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by tectak - 02-15-2012, 08:22 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 02-16-2012, 04:15 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by only rob - 02-18-2012, 02:02 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 02-18-2012, 04:01 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by billy - 08-10-2012, 08:55 AM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 08-10-2012, 03:41 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by billy - 08-10-2012, 04:08 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by Leanne - 08-10-2012, 04:47 PM

RE: Phases of Venus - by billy - 08-10-2012, 04:52 PM

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