02-05-2012, 12:58 AM
that is what I figured, ok.
I gave it another fresh read this morning, and it makes much more sense (sometimes, you read a line in a certain way and it just becomes difficult to see it in a new one). think the order of the line threw me off: it puts the object (penknife) and subject (hot-lips) before the verb , so I was trying to see it in a more natural order-- that changes a lot. much, much clearer to me now; sorry it took so long!
I gave it another fresh read this morning, and it makes much more sense (sometimes, you read a line in a certain way and it just becomes difficult to see it in a new one). think the order of the line threw me off: it puts the object (penknife) and subject (hot-lips) before the verb , so I was trying to see it in a more natural order-- that changes a lot. much, much clearer to me now; sorry it took so long!
Written only for you to consider.