Summer's Day

[billy]

it's weird how a title makes you think oh look another of of those poems. and for me this title does.

i really enjoyed the solid images in the last half the poem (from 'a polite nastiness')
i also enjoyed a lot of what went on before that but a few of the undefinable things left me wanting details.

i did like teasing new leaves from old wombs. and but yearns for the quietus of a slim, contented soul.

while Love cannot survive the sun, felt a bit cliché

all in all i thought it a pretty good write. with good flow.

thanks for the read.