01-19-2012, 11:14 PM
I am very grateful for the time and thought you have put in to help me improve it. It is certainly beneficial for me, I hope, as is often the case for me when I help someone with a piece, it also benefits you. Regardless, this is not an easy piece to deal with, if for no other reason because of it's lenght, so I appreciate you hanging in there with me. You have already given me more constructive criticism than all the other responses I have received from this being posted on several other sites. I do want to tell this story, but I want to tell it in such a way that people will read it, or else what is the point?
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.