01-17-2012, 03:55 PM
Thanks for the read Billy. I look forward to whatever you might have to say.
I use a lot of off rhyme and near rhyme, exact rhyme irritates me. You might also notice
awed-fall
awe and fall rhyme, but adding the ed ending to awe makes it appear as though it doesn't.
Or oblivion and man
I think all are intentional, primarily to break of the monotony, especially in something this long. This is after all, only the first four sections. If I ever finish it, it will have in excess of 28 sections.
I'm hoping to die before then
Dale
I use a lot of off rhyme and near rhyme, exact rhyme irritates me. You might also notice
awed-fall
awe and fall rhyme, but adding the ed ending to awe makes it appear as though it doesn't.
Or oblivion and man
I think all are intentional, primarily to break of the monotony, especially in something this long. This is after all, only the first four sections. If I ever finish it, it will have in excess of 28 sections.
I'm hoping to die before then
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.