-From “The Fall of Sons of Sirion” Canto II
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this will take a lot of work from me so bear with me please. i'll have to read it a lot to sort out what i think.
did notice empathy and greed lose the rhyme on the first take. it occurs in a few more. can't see if there intended just yet though so hold water Smile

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RE: -From “The Fall of Sons of Sirion” Canto II - by billy - 01-17-2012, 03:55 AM



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