01-17-2012, 01:30 AM
Mark,
hoo r u ta crtisize mai speldin, u mus tink uze godor sumtin. Mai speltin es perfk da ways id es cuz eye spled thengs duh ways dat fels gud tu may. An iffen eys saz ids K, den ids K. K? Ey red uh buk bi sum feller namo Ray, un dat wat ee saz, zo dare!
That's a fair translayshun (see, being from Ally-bam-me isn't always a drawback), but it is "fool head" not "entire head", and it is "a red flower with burnt umber petals." As far as changing it, I am sorry you are incapable of seeing the brilliance of this great poem but, editing would only destroy my artistic integrity.
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Billy,
I guess I shouldn't have used your name, it just gave it away to easy!
I can't shove it where the sun don't shine, that avenues already full, why do think I am posting on this site?
At least you realize it is a poem!
Dale
hoo r u ta crtisize mai speldin, u mus tink uze godor sumtin. Mai speltin es perfk da ways id es cuz eye spled thengs duh ways dat fels gud tu may. An iffen eys saz ids K, den ids K. K? Ey red uh buk bi sum feller namo Ray, un dat wat ee saz, zo dare!
That's a fair translayshun (see, being from Ally-bam-me isn't always a drawback), but it is "fool head" not "entire head", and it is "a red flower with burnt umber petals." As far as changing it, I am sorry you are incapable of seeing the brilliance of this great poem but, editing would only destroy my artistic integrity.
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Billy,
I guess I shouldn't have used your name, it just gave it away to easy!
I can't shove it where the sun don't shine, that avenues already full, why do think I am posting on this site?
At least you realize it is a poem!
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.