01-14-2012, 08:59 AM
My Own Truth is not a poem. It was written during a time when poetry was very promenant in my life. The value in it is that is was a well written piece and always inspired others to look at their own truths. Billy was spot on about the last line (Bravo). It doesn't even belong in the piece. As far as editing goes, I wish that could but I would hate to depreciate the value. A famous writer (who exactly escapes me right now) once said "to write is human, to edit devine." Thanks for the feedback everyone. My only feedback is about the piece witht the father and son. Where is the truth?