01-14-2012, 05:25 AM
If the writer calls it a poem, it's a poem.
As far as wisdom goes:
"The perception that wisdom increases with age is a by-product
of the high correlation between cynicism and reality."
- Frances Wilman
This particular poem is redundant and needs editing.
As a challenge, see if you can edit it down to about 25 words.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions