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erthona- will certainly have a look at expanding the ideas of the 7 and 8: actually had a similar thought afterwards, and am glad you agree. As to the "scanning", will have a peek and see what I can add/ do to clarify.

granny- I'm glad you were able to connect with this! and even immediately! I'm glad you liked that stanza in particular; it was one bit that I was able to salvage from the older poem.
Written only for you to consider.
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Bus Ad - by Philatone - 12-29-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: Bus Ad - by popeye - 12-29-2011, 10:24 AM
RE: Bus Ad - by Philatone - 12-29-2011, 01:13 PM
RE: Bus Ad - by Erthona - 12-29-2011, 03:53 PM
RE: Bus Ad - by grannyjill - 12-29-2011, 04:22 PM
RE: Bus Ad - by Philatone - 01-13-2012, 09:26 AM



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